Homework Block 4

• Be sure to read the introductions and one body paragraph in each of the model essays.
• Be sure to annotate the models for the qualities that you see in each. Remember that the purpose of reading the models is to give you a sense of how you might revise your draft in order to improve the quality of the draft. If you need additional guidance, be sure to consult the rubric attached to the models.
• You were supposed to share your draft via googledocs so that we can get a sense of the strengths and weaknesses of the draft.