Monday, December 21, 2015

Homework

  • Be sure to have read the Morrison short story for Wednesday: http://linksprogram.gmu.edu/tutorcorner/NCLC495Readings/Morrison_recitatifessay.doc.pdf
  • The discussion questions that are due on Wednesday are below:


American Literature                                                           Name
Toni Morrison -- “Recitatif” -- Discussion Questions

1.)  With Twyla and Roberta we have one Afro-American character and one Caucasian-American character.  But which character is which?  And, how did you arrive at your decision?  What is your evidence?





2.) Why does the story continually return to references to the orchard and to Maggie?  What is significant in these continual references?  What are we to make of the confusion Twyla experiences in her memories of these things Then Roberta admits doubts about her own story.  What’s going on here? (You might consider some of the notes we took on memory and how it works).



3.     Why does Twyla stay at the demonstration, carrying her sign, even when the disorder of the group has made her own placard meaningless?





4.) Is this ultimately a pessimistic story?  Or do identity, and friendship, show themselves as transcendent somehow, undamaged in their essence by change?  What details in the story help you to decide on your answer?
6.) Notice how the Howard Johnson’s restaurant is described as a “shelter” on page, and that St. Bonny’s was also a “shelter” Any significance to this?









7.) According to The American Heritage College Dictionary and the Encarta World English Dictionary, “recitation” and “recitative” are given the following definitions.  How might these help to explain, or continue the explanation of, Morrison’s title?
  • The public reading aloud of something or reciting of something from memory, esp. poetry.
  • The listing or reporting of something.
  • Of, or relating to, or having the character of a recital or recitation.
  • Mus. – a vocal style in which a text is declaimed in the rhythm of natural speech with slight melodic variation.
  • A style of singing that is close to the rhythm of natural speech, used in opera for dialogue and narration.
8.) Since at least the 1980s, Morrison’s work has defied easy categorization.  So, instead of beginning with possible connections between American Realism and Naturalism, what other narratives does “Recitatif” remind you of -- other works by Morrison or works by other fiction writers, dramatists, or screenwriters?


 

Wednesday, December 9, 2015

Block 1 Homework for Friday

Then, respond, in well written and thoughtful sentences, to the infographics on the blog. You might consider the following issues, but you are not limited to the issues that I list here.

1. What's the most surprising information?
2.What do you believe the causes of disparity in wealth is?
3. Do you think that the wealth distributions is a problem? Why?
4. What are the implications of these infographics for the American dream?
5. Do you believe that the economic disparities will affect you and your future?

Monday, December 7, 2015

Homework for Thursday's class

  • Be sure you have read and are prepared for the reading quiz.
  • Prep the questions for the graded discussion.
  • If you have not completed the written assignment on the symbolism of the car in the novel, be sure to complete this before class on Wednesday.

Tuesday, December 1, 2015

Homework for Thursday

  • For Thursday's class, please read chapter 7 of Gatsby. While you are reading please mark the passages in the chapter that pertain to the automobile.
  • For Monday's class chapters 8 and 9 and due

Wednesday, November 25, 2015

Happy Thanksgiving!

  • Chapter 7 of Gatsby is due on 12/3
  • Chapters 8 and 9 are due on 12/7
Enjoy your Thanksgiving!

Monday, November 23, 2015

Moday 11/23

  • We read chapter 5 of Gatsby in class, and we discussed whether we felt we could trust Nick and whether we believed that Gatsby and Daisy were in love at the end of chapter 5.
  • Chapter 6 is due for Wednesday.
There will be no additional reading homework over Thanksgiving. Enjoy your break.

Thursday, November 19, 2015

In class

In class we viewed and took notes on the following TED talk: https://www.google.com/search?q=how+to+spot+a+liar+ted&ie=utf-8&oe=utf-8

  • We took a quiz on chapters 3 and 4


  • We also discussed the lies and rumors in Gatsby chapters 3 and 4.

Wednesday, November 18, 2015

Block 5

  • If you did not complete your character analysis paper in class, it is due in class on Thursday.

Friday, November 13, 2015

For class on Tuesday!

  • Be sure that your Notice and Focus sheet is completed. If you were unable to complete the sheet in class you will need to complete it in the ERC.  You will not be able to complete this without reading Gatsby chapters 1 and 2.
  • We will be writing a character analysis piece on your assigned character in class on Tuesday.

Moore                                                                                             Name

Analysis Rubric

QUESTION:____________________________________________________________________________

Remember that when you read you might consider the following list helpful for making your observations.

·        Important words or word choice

·        Patterns

·        Binaries (opposites)

·        Making the implicit explicit (Making things obvious that might not seem obvious)

·        How the piece is put together (Structure of the passage, sentence, chapter etc.)

·        Repetitions

·        Anomalies

·        Literary Devices

Observations      (Complete this first)                              Interpretive Leap (Complete AFTER observations)

 
1.       
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
2.       
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
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Rough Draft of claim/thesis (In other words, how would you now answer the question you posed at the top of the sheet) :  ____________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________________________________
Revision of claim/thesis (Revise for precision and clarity):__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Wednesday, November 4, 2015

Homework for Friday 11/6

  • Be sure to write your vignette. The topic of the vignette is: A Memory that is important to you. Be sure to use the techniques we learned in September to write a compelling story: dialogue, showing, style, characterization, voice and symbol.  

Tuesday, October 27, 2015

Homework for class on Thursday 10/29

We will write on these sources when you return to class on Thursday.  The writing will be done in class on Thursday, so it is important that you come to class with the reading done.

Friday, October 23, 2015

Block 1 Homework for Monday

  • Read "Speaking of Courage" and write questions that you would like to discuss for the chapter.
Have an nice weekend!

Wednesday, October 21, 2015

Homework for 10/23

  • Today I collected the Regents Task III you completed.
  • The homework is to read the chapter "The Sweetheart of Song Tra Bong" and to write questions about the chapter that you would like to discuss.
  • Below is the link to Tim O'Brien discussing stories and how he approaches the task of telling a "true" story.
  • http://bigthink.com/videos/tim-obrien-tells-a-true-war-story

Friday, October 9, 2015

The week of 10/13

  • In class today you received the Common Core task that we will be working on, and three texts to read and analyze.
  • For class on Thursday, you will read and annotate the texts.
  • In class on Thursday you will take notes on the PBS documentary in your Cornell notebooks. You can find the link to the documentary below. http://www.pbs.org/veterans/stories-of-service/stream-tv/a-to-z/draft/
  • On Monday, 10/19, you will be writing the Common Core task in class. Be sure to bring all that you need with you. If you don't bring your texts, you will be provided clean texts, but you won't have access to your notes.

Wednesday, October 7, 2015

Homework for Friday

  • Read the chapter "On the Rainy River"
  • Complete the discussion questions for the chapter. Be sure you answer in complete sentences with thoughtful ideas!

Monday, October 5, 2015

Class on Monday 10/4

Wednesday, September 30, 2015

Homework for Thursday (block1) and Friday (block 5)

  • Be sure to read the chapters "The Things They Carried" and "Love" from the book, The Things They Carried.
  • If you don't have a book, you can stop into room C246 in order to get a book.

Friday, September 25, 2015

Block 5 post your comments here

  • Be sure to bring your revised literacy vignette to class on Tuesday with the peer review sheet and a copy of an earlier draft.
  • In the comments section please answer the following question: What did you learn from peer review? How could we make peer review more useful in the future?

Block 5 Post your comment here!

For Tuesday be sure to bring in a revised literacy vignette with a draft and a peer review.

In the comment section please respond to the following questions: "What was helpful about peer review? How could we improve the process?"

Wednesday, September 23, 2015

Reminders for class on Friday

  • Today you watched and took notes in your Cornell Notes notebook on the TED talk "The Girl Who Demanded School." If you were absent, please watch the talk and take notes.

Tuesday, September 22, 2015

Reminders for Friday

  • Today in class we watched "The Girl Who Demanded School." We also took Cornell notes on this TED talk. If you were absent, be sure to make this up. Notebooks are available in C246. Here is the link: http://www.ted.com/talks/kakenya_ntaiya_a_girl_who_demanded_school?language=en
  • Students in block 5 have to complete the notes on the TED talk, as we did not have time to finish the notes. The notes will be graded.
  • If you have not handed in 3 copies of your literacy vignettes, you lost 15 homework points. If you don't present me with copies before Friday you won't be able to participate in peer review, and you will be required to complete peer review outside of class. Be sure to come prepared!
  • See you on Friday!

Friday, September 18, 2015

Block 1 and Block 5 Homework

Your homework is to revise your literacy vignettes with the showing details we discussed in class.

The process of revision is as follows: Write the main idea for each vignette; identify places where you could strengthen the main ideas through showing; brainstorm showing details; rewrite the vignette.

In order to receive credit for the revisions, you need to bring 3 typed copies of your revision to class.

Friday, September 11, 2015

The homework for Tuesday or Wednesday depending on your block

Be sure to have a complete draft of your literacy vignettes in class. If you didn't complete the draft in class, please complete it for homework.


Your Literacy History


 


 

What is literacy?


 

It’s more than just reading and writing!  What does it mean to be a literate person?

 

For our purposes, literacy is:

 

·        A set of skills, behaviors, attitudes and dispositions demonstrated by people who function successfully in a field.  These skills allow people to feel comfortable and confident as they function in an educated group.

 

 

What do you think reading / writing literacy is?

 

Do you remember defining moments that shaped your reading and writing literacy?

 

Do you like writing and reading?  Do you avoid reading or writing at all costs?  When was the first time you wrote or read something you loved?  Did you write or read because you wanted to, or did someone make you write?  What kind of feedback did your parents/ teachers/ friends give you on your writing or reading?

 

On the back of this sheet of paper is your literacy timeline.  Brainstorm moments in your life that most stick out as having shaped your views on writing.

 

Assignment:  Pick any five of these moments that you feel best represent your life as a writer (or non-writer, as the case may be!).  Write at least six sentences per memory relaying that experience to your reader.  Be as specific as possible. Use details to help you convey this memory. REMEMBER TO CONSIDER YOUR VOICE AS A WRITER!  I want to hear you in your writing, and I want to see what you experienced.

 

This assignment MUST be typed, 12 pt standard font, STAPLED!

 

Your assignment is due next class! 

 

M. Forster

My Literacy History

 

 

Memory: 5 years old

I’m in trouble.  I’ve been sent to my room and told not to come out.  I can’t recollect what I did to land myself there, but it must have been bad.  Sitting there, in solitary confinement, I don’t quite know what to do with myself.  I must remove myself from this dreadful situation immediately, but how?  I find an old Steno notebook in my toy box and begin to construct my plea for freedom.  I write an apology note to my mother, begging her to forgive me for what I had done.  I offered her the alternative of “forgetting about me” if she wanted to.  My brother Travis having just been born, I also told her I hoped she “had a nice baby” (the implication that I may never see any of them again because of my imprisonment).  I folded it up like a letter, addressed it to my mother, and shoved it under my bedroom door where it skimmed down the hallway. 

Within moments I was released from my shackles and permitted to rejoin humanity.  The power of writing astounded me, and I kept it as a tool, in reserve.

 

Memory: 8 years old


 

I excel at penmanship.  I practice D’Nilean handwriting in my workbork.  I like its curly letters and graceful turns.  I hold the pencil tightly and stare intently at the guidelines on the paper, making sure all of my arches and tails fall exactly where they should.  This seems to be the sign of a good writer.  Row after row of scripty m’s proved I had the gift.

 

Memory: 10 years old


 

I try to keep a diary.  It seems direly important for me to do so.  I purchase a diary from the Weekly Reader book club at school.  It has a real lock and everything.  I decide it’s imperative to write in it to record all my deepest and darkest thoughts.  I write in it religiously for three days.  For the next three after that I write profound entries like “Went to school.  Had hot dogs for dinner.”  These entries make me feel guilty, and I rip them out.  Looking back at my first entries, I find them embarrassing and vulnerable.  I rip these out too, shredding them into a billion little pieces.  Over the next decade I will have a dozen of these diaries that will all meet the same fate.  I feel some obligation to record things, to be a writer.  I feel dreadful about my inability to channel that creative power and write.  I’m caught up in what a diary should be…what I think a diary should be, rather, and it renders me absolutely impotent to write anything.

Memory: 12 years old


 

I’ve finally found something I can write.  It’s sixth grade and I have started writing parodies of well-known songs.  I write one about a classmate who was overweight (the irony being that I, too, was overweight) to the tune of “I’m a little tea pot”.  “I’m an (insert name here), short and stout.  Here’s my love handles, here’s my snout.”  I write other parodies too, without one particular victim, but a lot of creative use of four-letter words.  These are the kinds of poems and songs that would make my mother shriek with horror and make my grandmother pray for my soul.  I get laughs.  I write more songs.  I get more laughs.  I branch out into poetry.  I never take my writing seriously.  No one else does either.

Memory: 13 years old


 

My seventh grade English teacher thinks I’m a poor writer.  Well, she doesn’t come right out and say so, but everything I turn in comes back with elaborate red splotches all over it, as though some poor Bic pen exploded on my page.  I write a profile of my best friend.  I’m creative, I incorporate pictures and stickers, I write neatly, I use stencils.  Mrs. Sundell remains unimpressed.  She seems to be communicating to me in her bizarre foreign tongue.  AWK.  R.O. SP.  It was worse than Morse code.  I don’t know what she wants from me, and after a few failed attempts, I stop trying.  I’m a poor writer.  I sigh, and accept my lot in life.

 I write academic papers with the help of my personal friend, Encyclopedia Britanica.  I copy entire paragraphs from books that I don’t include on my bibliography, so as not to be traced.  I write a thoughtful 10th grade thesis on Ezra Pound’s Cantos (which I still don’t understand), which is almost entirely borrowed, with the exception of some filler.  I avoid writing at all costs.

 

Friday, August 28, 2015

Welcome to the 2015-2016 school year/syllabus


ENGLISH 11R:  THE AMERICAN EXPERIENCE           Course Overview

Dr. Moore
e-mail:   kmoore@niskyschools.org        
blog: http://henrywalt.blogspot.com/

 

The new Common Core English Regents Exam:

Your class will be the first group of juniors to take the new Common Core ELA Regents Exam.  This test is very different than the old English Regents.  On that test you will be faced with the following challenges:

 

**  You will need to read, comprehend, and analyze complex texts, both nonfiction and fiction, on demand. 

 

**  You will need to be able to identify and analyze the literary and rhetorical techniques the writers of those texts use to convey ideas.  You will have to construct a literary analysis essay that focuses on the use of those techniques.

 

**  You will also have to construct a research-based argumentative essay based on four or five sources that will be provided to you in the test booklet.  You will have to pull evidence from those sources to develop your claim as well as dispute opposing claims.

 

As you can see, the new English Regents is very challenging and requires that you repeatedly practice the skills needed for completing the above tasks.  It is no longer enough to simply remember what your teacher said about the literature you studied together in class.  In order to tackle the tasks on this test, you will have to practice close reading and source-based argumentative writing.

 

 

Course Description:

 

          We are here to get you ready to the task ahead.  Here’s what we have planned to help you prepare:

 

  1.  We will be reading BOTH fiction and nonfiction texts.  The focus won’t be remembering everything that happens in the books.  The focus will be on the literary, rhetorical, and persuasive strategies the different writers use to convey ideas.

 

  1. We will continually practice the skill of close reading and annotation with increasingly complex texts.

 

  1. Rather than avoid difficult vocabulary, we will identify those words in the text that are challenging and use various strategies to incorporate those words into our working vocabularies.

 

 

  1. We will use a class blog as a vehicle for sharing ideas and as a precursor to larger seminar and fishbowl discussions.

 

  1.  We will work on communicating ideas clearly and effectively.  We will address common errors in sentence structure; we will review the components of effective paragraphs; we will experiment with different sentence patterns to add sophistication to our writing styles.

 

  1. We will study the art of argumentation and look at ways to craft language with increasing clarity and effectiveness.  We will learn about ways to use structure, evidence, and rhetorical techniques to develop claim and address opposing claims.

 

 

  1. We will practice using sources effectively in our writing.  We will practice using various types of evidence to strengthen claims.  We will also show you how to effectively frame quotations in our writing as well as correctly cite the sources you use.

 

  1. In addition, many activities in this course will ask you to expand your point of view and to have informed opinions about the social, cultural, and political issues that are shaping the larger world today.  Expect debates, dramatic role-playing, and engaging discussions, as well as writing assignments that push you to analyze and explore thoughtful questions.

 

 Ready to get started?

 

 

 

 

MATERIALS YOU WILL NEED

  1. A notebook for both notes and pull out paper.
  2. A sturdy folder to keep a lot of different handouts.
  3. A planner—this is something you can use for all of your classes to help you keep track of dates for up-coming assignments and long term projects.
  4. A pen and pencil.
  5. Whatever text (book, play, shorter work, article) we are working with..
  6. A few stacks of sticky notes to help you make notes as you read.
  7. A google account so that you can access the blog (it is often best to use your school account).
  8. A book of your choosing so that aside from the texts we look at together, you can keep practicing your reading skills by….READING!

 

Explanation of Grading

 

Daily grading:  A point system will be used to calculate your grade.  You will be provided with a grade sheet that explains the criteria for formal assignments.  However, you will also receive grades for reading assignments (please note that I check reading with a quiz or a check of your annotations), blog entries, participation, and other kinds of class activities and assignments.  Your grade is a total of the points you earn from both formal papers and these other types of activities. 

 

Possible point values include the following:

*  Short homework assignments (like vocab, grammar, questions):       5-20 points

*  Reading, vocab and other types of quizzes:                             10-30 points

*  Outside reading participation (you bring in your book and actively read during free read periods)                                                                                  10 points

*  Projects                                                                                   20-60 points

*  Participation (in writing groups, seminar, group projects):  10-40 points

*  Blog entries:                                                                            20-40 points

*  Informal writing:                                                                     20-60 points

*  Formal writing (papers that involve drafts and revision):             60-100  points

*  Presentations:                                                                       20-50 points

* Research:                                                                             50-100 points

 

 

Calculating your final course grade:  Your final course grade will be calculated by the averages of each quarter and final exam.  Each marking period will count once (4/5 of your grade) and your final exam will count once (1/5 of your grade). 

 

The final exam:  The final exam for this course is the Common Core New York State English Language Arts Regents Exam.  All juniors are expected to take this test at the end of the year.  It is the English Department’s policy that this assessment counts as the final exam for all juniors.  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Here is what you need to do in order to have success in this class:

·       Actively participate in class discussions, debates, role-playing activities, and group work.
·       Come to class prepared.  Prepared means bringing your book and other materials to class with you.  Prepared means that you have completed the assigned reading and any written work ahead of time.  Prepared also means that you have completed assignments with care and thought.
·       Use the calendar on the website to plan ahead so that you aren’t waiting until the last minute to complete work.
·       Use good old fashioned pen and paper if you do run into technology problems.
·       Write clearly and develop ideas thoughtfully.  Use assignments as learning opportunities – don’t just do it quickly to get it done.
·       Read carefully and without distractions – look up words you don’t know, write down questions, ideas, and connections on sticky notes, and come to class with text-specific questions.
·       Use teacher feedback as a guide to help you work on your own writing goals. Use strategies that we teach you to help you with reading and analysis.
·       If you are absent, take the initiative to contact me or look at the website to get caught up.  Ask about what you missed.

 

 

Attendance

Lates, cuts, and absences will be dealt with in accordance with Niskayuna High School’s policies.

If you are LATE for a class (after the second bell to 19 minutes) you will receive one detention. 

If you are LATE (20 minutes or more) for a class and do not have a legal excuse, it is considered a cut and the appropriate paperwork will be sent to your assistant principal.

 

If you CUT a class, the appropriate paperwork will be sent to your assistant principal.  You should receive 3 after school detentions from your administrator.  In addition, ANY WORK THAT WAS DUE THAT BLOCK AND/OR THAT TOOK PLACE DURING THE BLOCK WILL RECEIVE A ZERO.  This work cannot be made up. 

 

ABSENCES will also be dealt with according to school policy.  For a full year class the breakdown is as follows:

                        Stage I:                8 absences

                              Stage II:                              13 absences

                              Stage III:             15 absences

 

 

ABSENCES AND ASSIGNMENTS:

 

What if I am absent and a written assignment is due?

If you are legally absent when a major paper or assignment is due, you must hand in that paper or assignment when you return to school.  If you are legally absent only during class time (for example you come into school late with an excuse), then that paper or assignment is due when you return to school.  That means there may be an occasion when you will turn in a paper or assignment to the English Resource Center.  If you need to do that and I am not there, you must have an adult date and time the piece and provide their initials.  If you place something in my mailbox without the date, time, and initials, it will be graded according to WHEN I FOUND IT IN MY MAILBOX.

 

What if I am absent and I am supposed to do a presentation?

First of all contact me and try to contact members of your group.  If your group goes on without you, you will receive no credit for that portion of the assignment until you make it up.  If you do not make the assignment up promptly, you will receive no credit for that assignment.  If you know ahead of time that you will be out, let me know so that we can make other arrangements for your work.

 

What if I am absent when reading is due?

If you have been given the reading schedule ahead of time (in an earlier class or on the website), you are still responsible to keep up with the reading.  When you return to class, you will be expected to take any reading quizzes or participate in any class activities related to the reading.  The grades on those quizzes and activities will stand.  If you have to make up past quizzes, you will need to go the ERC during your free time and ask an adult to get the quiz for you.  You will take it there (they usually only take 10 minutes) and then put it in my mailbox.  You will have two days to make up missed quizzes.

 

What if I am absent when a blog entry is assigned?

You can still do the blog entries at home – just check the calendar on my website to get the assignment and then click on the link to our class blog. 

 

 

 

Late Work Policy

 

You are required to complete the homework on time.  Assignments are due at the beginning of class.  Any work turned in after that time will be considered late.

 

If we go over a homework assignment in class, then it cannot be made up and you will receive a 0 on it. Assignments like vocabulary and reading questions and annotations will be things that we go over in class.   If you are absent on the day homework is due, you must turn in the homework on the day you return. 

 

 

For writings and larger projects, late papers and projects will be accepted, but with a penalty. Late assignments will be given a 10 point penalty or letter grade per class day. If you turn in a paper or project in the English Resource Center and I am not there, please have an adult date and initial it, so I know when it was received.  Do not simply leave something in my mailbox.**If something out of the ordinary comes up and you need an extension, it is best to contact me PRIOR to the due date and we can figure out a plan together.  DO NOT SIMPLY WAIT UNTIL SOMETHING IS PAST DUE TO TALK TO ME!!

 

 

Academic Integrity Policy

 

The policy is located in your High School Code of Conduct booklet.  Please read it with your parents, and come in with any questions you might have.  I take ALL instances of academic integrity seriously and will deal with them in concert with the administration.  This includes copying homework or passing off someone else’s writing as your own. 

 

Academic Integrity violations include, but are not limited to, the following:

·       Cheating on a test or quiz OR allowing another student to copy from your test

·       Turning in a paper or project without textual citations AND/OR a Works Cited page

·       Copying homework or a paper OR allowing another student to copy your homework or paper

·       Using study aids (Spark Notes, etc.) instead of reading the actual text OR asking another students to summarize the reading for you because you didn’t do it

·       Falsifying  information, including data or citations

·       Plagiarism:  submitting material that in part or whole is not entirely your work without attributing those portions to their correct source

·       Unauthorized collaboration on an academic assignment (this includes siblings or parents)

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Extra Help

 

I encourage you to come see me about your writing, reading difficulties, or questions PRIOR to due dates.  We can also go over your writing after it has been graded to come up with strategies that will help you in the future.  Here is my schedule:

 

 

A/C days
B/D days
Block 1
 
 
Block 6